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Short Stories/One Shot: Short Parables

This Book was Written by karinberry

--> Cover/Description
I think you have the perfect cover for your book, it goes perfectly with your work.
As for the description, I would place your rankings and awards winnings on the end of the description instead of in the beginning.
I liked your description, it tells your readers exactly what your book is about and I loved your quote!!

-->The beginning
I'm happy you started with a poem, it was a very good start.
But since is a boom with some of your favorite things and not a specific thing, I would like to suggest that you would include an introduction chapter at the very beginning so your future readers would understand more about you as a reader, and I think that would make the book feel more complete.

-->Detailing/Grammar
Your writing style is good, I think you are amazing good at describing and detailing surroundings and emotions as well.

-->Character Development/Plot
Is not much to say about developing plots or characters as this is a short story book, but I think you get to the point nicely done, for what I saw, you involved every aspect of the storyline and combined very well.

-->Presence as Writer
You add some comments along with your chapters, but because this is not a specific genre and you did different things, that's why my suggestion of an introduction chapter so your readers can connect with you as a writer.

-->My view as a reader...
To be as truly honest, as a reader I'm not into short stories that are not categorized by one genre, I usually would go for random books if I wasn't up to read a whole book, or if I wasn't in the mood for poetry.
But I was pleasantly surprised by your book.
Maybe it would help, as a reader view if you would point out in the title of each chapter what exactly is that chapter about, so your readers wouldn't be a little lost.
Overall I enjoyed reading your book.

I would rate this book 4/5

Reviewed by Claudushka

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