Title: Manan os true love

Genre: os

Author: magical_starfly16

Judge: CathrineRajkumar

Cover/ title:

The cover was simple, you can do it better by adding quotes, the book name and your name. And your title is also good. I will love to give 1.3/2

Description:

The description was good, but though it doesn't have much description but it's enough for one shot. I would love to give 0.7/1

Storyline:

Your storyline is simply awesome but it's mostly in Hindi. It will be difficult for people who don't know Hindi. If you can please edit your story and translate the Hindi words in English.

I would love to give 1.5/2

Total: 3.5/5

All the best for your future dear...