Title: lost without you.

Genre: os

Author: AngelGoldieReal

Judge: CathrineRajkumar

Cover/title:

The cover was simply amazing. And it will attract every one to read your story.

And title is also good and it shows one will be lost if their loved ones is not with them.

I would love to give 1.75/2

Description:

Description is good but if you add some more points it will be good because it will help the people who don't know anything about swasan.

I would love to give 0.65/1

Storyline:

Storyline is simply awesome and every character is described perfectly. There are some spelling mistakes please correct them. Apart from this the story is superb.

I would love to give 1.75/2

Total: 4.15/5

All the best for your future dear