Book Name: S.S. Olympus

Written by: laorangerose

Genre: Science Fiction

Judged by: the_witt

Cover: What is not to love about this cover? All the elements of the story come alive!

There is a pretty girl with a sword? A three headed bird thing? And the caption is perfect. All the items needed to peak my interest. At once I can see the SciFi bent to this story. The First place stickers, mean that it will most likely be well written and have a great storyline. Great Job?

.9/1.00

Title:

This title, leads me to the adventure side of things. It has the idea of the Mythical to it so that brings in the storyline. Good Gob. I also really like the font here.

.8/1.00

Description:

All the elements that are needed, are right there in this description! Adventure, suspense, and a touch of the mystery. You've told us these are a re-write of classical mythology, so it's exciting to look up her tale and compare! Great job

.8/1.00

Beginning:

One of the things I truly miss in electronic versions of stories is the table of contents! And here I find one! With the titles of chapters we can start to imagine what lies ahead for us! Here in your preface you've given us not only those tidbits but you also explain just how passionate you are by relating the four years of research. You writing is spot n. Your grammar, amazing! And the story flow is practically perfect! (In every way ). But nestle such great work here this deserves a great ranking.

This is in my list!

1.9/2.0

Your Total Score: 4.4 out of 5