Book name: Ran shaipur
Written by: tlryder
Genre: Sci-fi
Judged by: dumbwater
Cover: The cover is very good. It is quite mysterious yet captivating. The font used is very good.
Rating-0.9/1
Title: The title is quite different yet indecipherable. We don't know what 'Ran Shaipur' means thus, we are left confused.
Rating-0.85/1
Description: The description is to the point and it gives a good idea about the plot of the book. My only complaint is that the description momentarily confused me. We don't have any idea about the worlds that are mentioned in the book and thus, we have no idea what the description says. It takes some time to understand it.
Rating- 0.8/1
Beginning: The beginning too like the description is a little confusing. We still have no idea about what is being talked about. Nonetheless, once we understand we see that the opening is quite powerful. It paints a vivid picture in our head and descriptions are quite good. The characterization is also quite impressive.
Rating-0.85/1
Plot: The plot is definitely more different than most of the books sci-fi books that I have read. It is twisted and turned at the right places. I quite like the hierarchy and the complexity of your world. It is very different. As the chapters proceed, I see more and more representation of the broken parts of our world in your story. The politics and the power-hungry characters are the proper representation of the politicians and leaders in our world. I loved the fact that you didn't hesitate to make the main character flawed. Quite a lot of authors run away from doing that. Of course, the tension between the character and his love interest gave me a lot of feels. As good as the story is, I feel that the words in the story are quite complex. Not every one who enjoys books is well versed in English. You should make your writing simpler as it comes across as if you have used the thesaurus too much.
Rating- 0.9/1
Total- 4.3/5