Book name: Loving the towers
Written by: CarrieGChandler
Genre: Sci-fi
Judged by: dumbwater
Cover: The cover is quite plain. It is not very intriguing and therefore I ask you to work on it as the text and the background are a little disinteresting.
Rating- 0.65/1
Title: The title is quite different. It makes you wonder about what towers are being talked about here and who exactly loves them. It makes you want to read the description.
Rating-0.9/1
Description: The description is too confusing. I found a lot of grammatical errors. For example, in the first sentence itself, the missing articles make you reread the sentence multiple times. Maybe instead of the word 'fam', you could use 'family' as the first word sounds a little too casual. I felt that there were too many quotation marks which would confuse a person as we don't know the hidden meanings yet.
Rating- 0.65/1
Beginning: I liked the way the prologue started out and I liked the story but the way it was written could have been better. The slight change in POVs is quite confusing. A few descriptions in the story are a little too long. They could definitely be shortened. I also felt that there was no need for fore thoughts to be enclosed in quotation marks.
Rating-0.85/1
Plot: The plot is actually quite interesting though I felt that the love story was moving a little too fast. A few smutty parts could have been left out and you could have proceeded with the plot. The chemistry between the characters is quite nice. I could see that they genuinely cared about each other and that they would do anything to meet each other again. Their love gave me quite a few feels. The writing style is quite good and the ending definitely made me emotional. It was written very beautifully.
Rating- 0.95/1
Total- 4/5