Book name : reece

Genre: romance

Contestant name : Kittysquid88

Judge name : 145bookreader

Review -

Cover : it's nice, but I think it gives more of a historical fiction vibe and since it is a love story maybe u could use something that represents love and emotions. Also since the girl has emotional issues, so having a dark background might tell about the plot and theme as well. (0.4/1)

Title : the title is good, since both the main characters have the same name, which is unexpected it makes the title more meaningful. (0.85/1)

Description : the description is nice, but I fell there is a repetion of a certain word, maybe u could enhance ur vocabulary, sometimes good words allure readers. (0.6/1)

About the story : I applaud u for writing on such hard hitting subjects, which people sometimes ignore to just read a happy story. Has a good emotional plot to keep the readers intrigued and for people to believe in love at even the lowest point.

I would appreciate if you would give proper attention to both the male and female lead. I believe maybe just because the female suffers problems, the male character is not given more importance and is shadowed by the female character.also since the description gives insight about both so giving equal space would be good.

I also believe that the pace of the story is quite fast, then meeting and falling in love in just a few minutes and a leap at that point breaks the flow. Maybe u should give the readers more time to connect to the characters and build up the chemistry. An emotional connection with the readers is very important.

Maybe u could improve the vocabulary and use better words that explain about the exact feelings of the characters. Also editing foe grammatical errors would be good.

I like ur plot and wish u the best of luck. Hoping my review would be helpful. (1/2)

Total score : (2.85/5)