Book name : Lost

Genre : romance

Contestant name : ShawMcKnight

Judge name : 145bookreader

Review -

Cover : I like the cover, it gives the exact idea if theme, about a wandering soul. (0.9/1)

Title : The title is fine as long as the storyline sticks by it, about a person who doesn't have motivation in life yet. (0.8/1)

Description : the description is nice but doesn't exactly go with the plot what u have written. It tells more about the life of the male character than the female one, yet the story has a different approach. Giving exact idea to the readers would help them relate to the story more. ( 0.5/1)

About the story : the concept is nice, but making sure what u want to convey reaches the reader is very important.

Although in the third person pov, who is speaking which dialogue and whose thoughts are being said can't be understood clearly. This confuses the reader and thus makes him drop the book.

I believe maybe using character names and clearing who is saying what would help.

Also telling total number of characters and there names would help us know who the lead is and what to expect of them.

There are certain grammatical errors which u should look into before publishing the chapter.

Overall your concept is good but not well executed. Think and edit, this will improve your skills.

I wish u the best of luck. (0.4/2)

Total score : (2.6/5)