Book name : destined destiny

Genre : romance

Contestant name : imallien

Judge name : 145bookreader

Review -

Cover : the cover is lively and seems intriguing enough. Also it gives a clear image that the characters are rich and very much in love. (0.95/1)

Title : I like the title as it tells about destiny and love is always destined, that there is always a chosen one for u which is basically the plot. (0.9/1)

Description : the description tells exactly about the characters and what kind of love story it is going to be, also gives an overview of the entire story line. (0.95/1)

About the story : the plot is nice, although a bit cliche, a rich ruthless billionaire falling for a sweet innocent girl. How she changes him and his views.

An important aspect of story writing is the presentation, how well the reader is able to get what u wish to convey. Using gaps and different writing styles like bold or italics would help in differentiating the dialogue from the personal thoughs of the character.

Maybe writing the plot on third person would help u tell the readers better about the characters, than using a side character's pov just for this purpose, who has no other role in the story.

There are many grammatical errors which disturb continuous flow of reading and often make the reader unable to get the exact meaning.

Also improving the vocabulary and using to the point sentences would help u garner more readers.

I wish u the best of luck for ur story. (0.9/2)

Total score : (3.7/5)