Book name : And I fell for you

Genre : romance

Contestant name : Pari-queen

Judge name : 145bookreader

Review -

Cover : the cover is nice and depicts a light hearted love story. But there is always a scope for improvement, since it is based on a prank maybe u could add something that also gives an insight to the plot. (0.9/1)

Title : the title is good enough, since the whole story is based on this prank and this line is the highlight of it. (0.95/1)

Description : The description is a bit confusing and the use of words right and wrong in context with the plot don't seem appropriate . Maybe letting the readers decide would be the best. Explaining the storyline in simple yet meaningful words would be great. (0.4/1)

About the story : the storyline seems interesting enough and has a new plot. I believe being more descriptive about them characters would help connect to them better knowing about what to expect from a character and his nature would help a reader accept his behavior at many points in the story.

Also I feel there are many parts where unnecessary description is given,like what a person is doing which sometimes looks like rambling and might disinterest the reader. Telling about the outfit of a character and giving the picture of the same is unnecessary, any one of the two would do.

Since the story is mainly based on the prank, explaining that part more and not rushing it would be good, as it is the highlight of the story and that is what the reader has been expecting based on the description.

Certain grammatical errors are there, which u might like to edit before publishing ur story.

I hope I could help you, and wish the best.

(1.2/2)

Total score :(3.45/5)