poetry: state of mind
Book name: State of mind
Genre: Poetry
Written by: joelle_fel
Judged by: paulinacollins
Review:
Cover: I didn't exactly understand what this cover is trying to convey at first. Then I understood that you used the moom to indicate the different phases of the thoughts running in your mind. I personally think that the cover is pretty unique. 0.7/1
Title: The title is not too complicated or too plain. It is the perfect title anyone could ask for a poetry book. 0.6/1
Description: The description is quiet intimidating. You see, when you actually tell particular someone to not read something, the first thing they do is reading it XD. You've kindled the reader's curiousity by this, Good job! 0.8/1
Content: Oh my god. You left me speechless, author. The poems I read there are some of the best things I've ever read. 'Pill of tears' and 'On my way to hell' were just whoa. And the last line in 'I have reasons':
'Your hands are in my heart, But your sight is looking to his eyes'
That just made me melt so badly. Again, the only thing you missed to give is hope. I understand that this book is based on sad themes and reality, but reality isn't always that bad, is it? 1.72/2
Your total score is 3.82, Hooray!!
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