Judge: luciferspinkwings

Contestant:
Luna_Lovegood2005
Title: If I Die

Genre: Poetry

Score: 4.10/5

Review:

I absolutely adore the editing on the cover. Not sure who made it, but it's simply incredible. While I did not necessarily understand the description at first, it's the first time I've everseen a poetry description using a 'character' in it, it did become more clear to me once I started reading the poems. Together, the poems form a story of some sorts, it seems like to me, which I honestly love. It's not something I often see.

Even after I finished reading as much as the first poem, I was left staring at the screen of my laptop in bewilderment, surprised at what I just found. Truly an undiscovered gem. The feelings are conveyed very well and it was truly pleasurable to read as it also raises questions in my mind. What happens when we die? Is death really the end of our sorrows? Beautiful.

I would like to leave the suggestion to maybewrite in stanzas. There aren't really any line breaks and it tends to stress me out - this also can be just me of course. This is very minor and not much of an issue.

Greetings,

luciferspinkwings