poetry: fragile
Book name: Fragile
Genre: Poetry
Written by: _Ayesha_Shaikh_
Judged by: paulinacollins
Review:
Cover: I really liked the cover, with its perfect type of font style. It's a good thing to put a quote or line in the cover. You've used the ideal line from your poem in the cover, making it more awesome. The cover clearly portrays the dark theme in which the book is written on. So I'll give this cover a 0.75/1
Title: The title, Fragile: like a bomb, first left me confused. I was wondering if you were saying it in a vunerable, in the verge of breaking way or in a brave warrior way. But then after starting to read the poems, I understood that it was the first one. The title itself is sad in a beautiful way. 0.8/1
Description: The description is simple but alluring at the the same time. When I first read the blurb, my hands were practically itching to tap the read button. Good job with that! 0.8/1
Content: The content is simply amazing. No, amazing isn't enough. Mind-blowing? Marvellous? I was in the verge of tears for most of the poems. Some were just so sad thst I closed my phone and sat staring blankly ahead, trying to calm down. I would easily give the content a full, only if it wasn't for one thing. Your poems are just too.... sad? That doesn't make me love it any less, but still. If it makes me, a normal and happy person this sad, how bad will it make a depressed person feel? I am not telling you to stop writing sad stuff, but I am saying you to give some hope at end. Hope is the the thing everyone is searching for nowadays. I understand that sad things are the ones you write about, but try to include hope in everything you write. 1.45/2
Your total score is 3.8/5. Kudos!!
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