Mystery: the chronicles of subhadra hegde
Hey there,
I'm Ria Rai... How are you doing guys?
So, Coming to the point... I'm here for giving reviews to the books which I'm judging... So Here you go.
1. Book Name Is: The Chronicles Of Subhadra Hegde.
2. The Genre Is: Mystery/Thriller.
3. Contestant's Name Is: PenFolk
4. And Judged By: Ria_Rai
Hello PenFolk, Let's start with your reviews.
Cover: First of all the cover is really nice. You've Focused on every small detail. Like, The story is about a doctor so there's a stethoscope, There was also some mysterious stuff. So all n all the cover was really nice. So you've got 0.89/1
Title: The Chronicles of Subhadra Hegde means the history of Subhadra Hegde. So as it is a mysterious story I didn't get The title first but as i read further I got it what you want to show. So you've got 0.79/1 for the title.
Description: So the description was quite attractive there is something like... She's good, She's evil. This is the main thing in the description which Forced me to read further. As she is good but at the same time she is evil. This really made me curious. So you've got 0.79/1 for the description.
Beginning: The main thing to attract a reader towards you is the beginning and you nailed it. Though there was some places where the punctuation marks were missing. You should concentrate on that too because it can change the meaning of the sentence which you wanted to explain. Otherwise the beginning was good. Mystery was all around. Concept was really amazing. And you get 1.56/2
Your Total Is: 4.03/05
This is my first time as a judge spare me if any mistakes.
Regards Ria Rai,
Thank You!
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