Book name: Obscured Reality
Written by: Memento_Vive
Genre: Mystery/Thriller
Judged by: dumbwater
Cover: The cover is quite mysterious. It would definitely draw a person in as a reader.
Rating- 0.9/1
Title: The title 'Obscured reality' which means 'unknown reality' definitely has a different ring to it. 'Whose reality has been tampered with?' That is a question which we can only find the answer to after reading the book. It is mysterious and seems to have a hidden meaning which draws us in as a reader.
Rating-0.95/1
Description: The description seems to contain a lot of questions which can only be answered by the story itself. It makes you doubt the innocence of the brother and also makes you curious. The vocabulary and grammar are perfect. My only complaint is that I feel that the description is too long. As a reader, we often want a small description of the story so that we can start reading the book as soon as possible. The long description defeats that purpose.
Rating-0.8/1
Beginning: The beginning was written beautifully. It makes you picture every scene right in front of your eyes. The victim's, that is Jayden's, death has definitely affected all of his loved ones and that is clearly expressed in the writing. It starts to make one question the innocence of all related to Jayden as we don't know if his death was even an accident.
Rating-0.9/1
Plot: The plot seemed to be a little dull at the start but progressed and became better with every chapter. I felt that the writing style too became better with every new chapter. The dialogues could use some work. The plot is very different and I really like the character development. Ava, who seems to be quite innocent from the outside, definitely comes across as a cunning character thus, becoming one of my favourites in the story. It is quite twisted but I feel that the plot should be taken a little slowly. It is going quite fast and it does become a little confusing. Like the kidnapping part to the letter to the end seemed a bit rushed. Some time should be given to process what has happened.
Rating-0.85/1
Total Rating- 4.4/5