Book Name: The Dark Side
Genre: Horror
Contestant name: paulinacollins
Judged by: SaachiDudani

Cover: "The greatest fight of light is not between light and dark but realising whose side you are in" Greatttt. Cover is simple, on point and perfect for the novel. It couldn't have got any better one. So it's a 1/1.

Title: "The Dark Side" Before reading this novel, the title seemed to be quite common to me and I couldn't frame any image of the novel based on this but after reading the novel, I really liked the title but it would have been better if you could have played with some words. So I would give it a 0.7/1.

Description: So I never thought about that it would be your own story. Firstly reading your username, I thought it to be Pauline Collins but then it was you. It was your story. And the description what you have given is actually what you call a "description". I am personally liking this novel before reading it. So I would give it a 0.9/1.

Beginning: Before speaking the pros, I would talk about the cons. Firstly, I feel that pictures describe a novel better and when I saw that you have put up one in the first chapter, I excepted it to be there in every chapter but it wasn't. There are some grammatical errors as well as some problems with the punctuations. Now talking about the pros, I loved how you wrote about your inner mind statements and some quotes that you used, I loved that too. So all in all, I would give it a 1.7/2.

TOTAL SCORE: 4.3/5