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Horror/Paranormal : The Angel, The Demon, And Me.

Book Name: The Angel, The Demon, and me.
Genre: Horror
Contestant name: Reading_Mermaid08
Judged by: SaachiDudani

Cover: The cover, I found it to be too simple and direct. There wasn't anything in it that would attract me to read the novel because before reading the description, the readers always check the cover. But still, the two wings, I feel, were good. So I would give it a 0.5/1.

Title: "the angel, the demon, and me" Firstly, there's a mistake in the name itself. The writer hasn't used capital letters and then, there should be no comma before 'and'. However, the name seems to be good enough. So I would give it a 0.5/1.

Description: Okay, so the way you tried to describe the novel was amazing but there were a lot of errors. And moreover, the last sentence which you started with 'when' is incomplete. After that you just started with your rankings. I didn't like the description very much, so I would give it a 0.4/1.

Beginning:
The beginning was good and the flow that the writer has kept since the very start stands out. The vocabulary used is amazing but can only be read by a specific audience. Here, it could have been better if the first chapter would be a little shorter. I felt it to be too long and stretched out. I felt the grammar was good but the vocabulary was of a little bit more high-level stuff. It'd have been great if you'd have kept it simpler. The flow is amazing. It keeps the reader engrossed right from the first word and holds the same charisma till the last word. So I liked it and I would give it a 1.8/1.

TOTAL SCORE: 3.2/5

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