Book Name: Devil's Heart
Genre: Horror
Contestant name: @luciferspinkwing
Judged by: SaachiDudani

Cover: "The devil is not so black as he is painted" Nice. The story's name is "Devil's heart but the name couldn't connect with the cover. It has wings. It would have been better if it had a black heart or something of that sort. And the 'Devil's' word got hidden in the black background, it would have been better if it would be written with a contrast colour. So I would give it a 0.5/1.

Title: 'Devil's Heart' I don't know why did you write the name in such a different font. For some it may be attractive but for some it may be confusing. As much simple and basic you keep, it's more effective. But the title seems quite good and interesting. DEVIL has a HEART. Wow. So for that I would give it a 0.85/1.

Description: Okay, I didn't understand how the word 'faithful' came. Was it sarcastic? I didn't get that. But I really liked the description. You mentioned your characters and some part of their life. You also mentioned what you are going to show in the novel, his side of story. So all in all, I would give it a 0.85/1.

Beginning: Before you read? Apprehensive. Prologue? Wow. I wasn't expecting it to be so good to be true but I really liked it. The pictures that you have put in every chapter made the chapter more attractive. The quotes are beautiful and perfect. Grammar used is good. Chapters are long, which is perfect. Dialogues written are quite understandable. So I would give it a 1.85/2.

TOTAL SCORE: 4.05/5