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general fiction: divorce

Book name: Divorce.
Author: NightJasmine15
Genre:General Fiction.
Author: dreamer2233

So here is your review.

Cover: speaking frankly this cover is good and attractive but it don't suit the story. Seeing this cover the first perception I got is that this book is of some writing contest not a story of a couple.I think you can add more in it making it apt cover.
You get: .5/1

Title: appropriate title for this book no doubt that this story revolves around the divorce of couple.
You get: 1/1

Grammar: I like the way you have used correct punctuations and upper case.
You get:1/1

Sentence formation:I felt that you have tried to make sentence complex and professional but many a time this has lead to wrongly formed sentence. While reading this book I felt wrong use of word at place of other.
For example in a sentence you have used call him, but I think ask him would have been more suitable instead.
I think you should reread your book by your own and you will also find some wrongly formed sentence working on which you can really give this a book a professional touch.

You get: .7/1

Story flow: Love the way this story flows from them getting divorced to how they met again. I also like the way you have created suspense of this mysterious person who is disturbing Minash and the suspense as to why they got divorced.
You get: 1/1

Total:4.2/5

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