Title: The Legend of the Blue Star
Author: NovelistAnne
Genre: fantasy
Judge: xAnnaJoyx

Beginning ~ 4/5
The summary lays out the contents of the book pretty well, without giving away the whole story. The first chapter does its job creating suspense and keeping the reader interested and wanting more.

Detail ~ 4/5
The author does inform the reader about the going-ons of that world, but there are times when the it seemed to be an info dump.

Character Development ~ 4/5
The main character has a relatable, teen-fiction like, personality, which the author does a good job of showing through different scenarios.

Grammar ~ 3.5/5
There were a few capitalization mistakes here and there, but the biggest issue was the dialogue and how there wasn't always space in between different speakers.

Plot ~ 5/5
Nothing drags on for more than it should, and all the events lead up to one big occasion.

Total: 4.1/5