Title: Nothing is Eternal
Author: WinterSleep85
Genre: fantasy
Judge: xAnnaJoyx

Beginning ~ 4/5
The summary was pretty long, but the first chapter was a good read. The problem at that moment was introduced smoothly, as was the main character and his goal.

Details ~ 5/5
The world building along with different roles and elements were all discussed in a natural way that went along with the storyline. The scenes were put into words nicely, and the reader had a clear vision of what everything looked like.

Character Development ~ 5/5
The author almost immediately displays the actions of the main character and the reasoning behind it. Further on in the story, the other MCs also had their own reasons for behaving the way they did.

Grammar ~ 5/5
The only issue that I noticed was the incorrect spelling for about two words. Otherwise, the sentences and punctuation were all correct and made easy to read.

Plot ~ 5/5
Each chapter had events in it that further moved along the story without wasting time or using unneeded scenes. Everything happened for a reason.

Notes: This was a fun read right off the bat! Good job.

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Total: 4.8/5