Title: Malediction
Author: KingKat_
Genre: fantasy
Judge: xAnnaJoyx

Beginning ~ 4/5
The first chapter did manage to set the mood for the book, establishing the family and main character, along with the antagonist.

Details ~ 1.5/5
The settings weren't described very well. The characters' appearances were also left out, until it was convenient (such as having the MC's hair being a problem for not being red).

Character Development ~ 4/5
Each character has their own personality and vices that all wear on each other.

Grammar ~ 2/5
There were few commas or other punctuation breaks in sentences, capitalization errors, and past-present tense mixups. Also, handfuls of sentences are unfinished and left dangling.

Plot ~ 3/5
The buildups to important events were nonexistent. There were also no actions or behaviors that hinted at any hidden powers.

Total: 2.9/5