Title: NOTHING TO FEAR
Genre: Fanfiction
Author: Starelf555
Judged by: CathrineRajkumar

Cover and title:
The cover matches your fanfic quite nicely, it's dark and mysterious, just perfect for the Black Veil Brides, and I think it stands out so that is definitely a plus.
Your title Nothing to fear is good and it's like motivation. I would love to give 1.5/2
Description:
As for the description, it works, it explains what your readers are about to encounter in your book, but I would suggest maybe give it just a little more detail about the Black Veil Brides are, because just like me, some people might not know, so for future readers who don't, maybe would be a good addition to your description to add just a little more information regards the band, and of course maintaining that dark suspense like you did but emphasize it, you have a huge opening with this kind of fanfic and you should make that into your favour.
I would love to give 0.75/1
Storyline:
The story is amazing but it has slight grammatical errors. And in first chapter it was difficult to understand the concept but in further chapter it was clear. And it just held the curiosity to know more from reading the first chapter.
I would love to give 1.65/2
Total : 3.9/5

All the best for your future dear.