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Fanfiction: Bandan: swasan and arshi

Title: Bandan: swasan and arshi


Genre: Fanfiction


Author: praju2797


Judged by CathrineRajkumar



Cover/title:


Cover is good and beautiful. And your title "bandan: swasan and arshi" it shows that the story will show the bonding of the couple and the cover will attract both the swasan and arshi fans.


I would love to give 1.3/2



Description:


The description is quite good and it will help the reader to understand the concept. And it's a different kind of story because most of the Fanfiction doesn't based on brother and sister bonding.


I would love to give 0.9/1


Storyline:


The concept was simply amazing and every characters are well described and did their roles amazingly. youryour story has some grammatical mistakes, so kindly please edit it.


I would love to give 1.6/2



Total: 3.8/5



All the best for your future dear


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