Fanfiction: Bandan: swasan and arshi
Title: Bandan: swasan and arshi
Genre: Fanfiction
Author: praju2797
Judged by CathrineRajkumar
Cover/title:
Cover is good and beautiful. And your title "bandan: swasan and arshi" it shows that the story will show the bonding of the couple and the cover will attract both the swasan and arshi fans.
I would love to give 1.3/2
Description:
The description is quite good and it will help the reader to understand the concept. And it's a different kind of story because most of the Fanfiction doesn't based on brother and sister bonding.
I would love to give 0.9/1
Storyline:
The concept was simply amazing and every characters are well described and did their roles amazingly. youryour story has some grammatical mistakes, so kindly please edit it.
I would love to give 1.6/2
Total: 3.8/5
All the best for your future dear
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