action/adventures: The Gathering, Bloodmoure Chronicles
Title: The Gathering, Bloodmoure Chronicles
Author: JRShepherd
Genre: action/adventure
Judge: xAnnaJoyx
Beginning ~ 5/5
The summary was enough to make the reader interested, and the prologue was mysterious as well as intriguing.
Details ~ 5/5
Appearances and setting descriptions were on point, giving the reader a clear image of the world. The world building was also stunning.
Character Development ~ 5/5
The main character immediately appears as a kind of person, one with internal and external conflicts that seem almost real at some times.
Grammar ~ 5/5
There weren't any problems in this department. The punctuation, spelling, and capitalization were all correct with the exception of 1-2 words.
Plot ~ 5/5
The story is easy to get swept up it, with suspense and action. Each chapter nicely sets up the events in the next and everything runs smoothly.
Notes: Wow, you've managed to get a perfect score 🤗. Keep up the good work!
Total:5/5
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