Book Name: Gwenivere's Game

Written by: NovaEraKitty

Genre: Action Adventure

Judged by: the_witt

Cover: This is lacking in aesthetics. While the art is good, it does not lend itself towards mobile platforms. All the subtle hints that are in the shadows get lost because it's so dark. Now let's talk about what people can see...A girl with a bow and quiver. This in itself, is very commonplace right now. And truly does not lend to screaming read me. The colours are blended and not true to the story.

.5/1.0

Title: The title gives us a glimpse at what we have in store, is very intriguing . When I see this with the cover, my interest is becoming a bit more. A Good job!

.5\1.0

Description:

Simple and striking. The author get straight to the meat of the story. And, it seems shows us, that the story will have humor added along with all the mystery and action, by commenting about cabbages! Great job with the simple, yet elegant way of bringing in the main characters for the story !

.8/1.00

Beginning:

Wow! Wow! Wow! Wow!

Ok let's get the basics out of the way! Grammar, good to decent. A good edit will fix most of the issues ! Flow is spot on! Characters are darn spiffing! ( for non UK that's mean really good!) your sentence structure is ok, you need to stray away from the same style some but otherwise, makes for a great read! Now, to the great stuff ! Oml. I really enjoyed this. It was go from the first sentence with a cabbage to Nox's Head all the way to the ending part where he... Did you guys think I'd spoiler you? Not I! Never READ THIS BOOK! I MEAN NOW! Like drop everything and read it!

1.9 /2.0

Your Total Score: 3.7 out of 5