Title: Greyholds
Author: Grimwall
Genre: action/adventure
Judge: xAnnaJoyx

Beginning ~ 4/5
The first chapter was interesting, and definitely lived up to the excitement of the summary.

Details ~ 4/5
The reader could get a clear picture of the setting, though there was just enough detailing for that.

Character Development ~ 3.5/5
At first, the main characters' personalities seemed to be perfectly laid out, but as the story continued the characters' actions didn't match their personalities.

Grammar ~ 3/5
There were sentences that needed commas and ran on, capitalization errors, and were choppy.

Plot ~ 4/5
The different points of view correlated well with each other and all helped the story move forward.

Total:3.7/5