Where the Oceans Meet by @Kripa2486
Book: Where the Oceans Meet by Kripa2486
Judge: Alex
For: Mystic Awards 2018
I love the title, however it needs to be clearer on the cover. Not sure about the synopsis. It is paced well and has a hook to it. There are no spelling errors, but some issues with punctuation and capitalization.Scene transitions can be confusing. From what I've seen other people write about these characters but this is from an interesting POV. Definitely creative. All the characters are great, love that this has females in empowering roles. They feel emotion and seem very real. The only thing that should be improved is possibly more descriptions of setting, otherwise a great read.
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