Judge: Monal 

For: Desi Lihaaz 2019

Cover and Title: How will the combination of the two reflect upon the plot of your story?

The cover is simple, reflecting upon the title, which in turn gives more depth to the summary provided.

Summary/Prologue and Chapter 1

The summary is very intriguing but so very short. I would love it if there was something, some hint towards this "mistake and/or void" the author is talking about. Either way, it sounds like a unique plot of letting go and coming back together only to have the scars of the past preferably play the role of antagonist. Or so is the impression I got from the summary, cannot wait to read further and see what's in store.

Wonderful start with that wedding theme imagination and it sounds as if something The Wedding Story will come up with. I am sure the TWD company in the novel is made up and not the real one but it definitely reminded me of TWS, unless the writer used them as inspiration. Either way, I am liking what I am reading. Especially that mystery, even I am wondering how they manage to have the cordial relationship. Relationships and bonds never ceases to amaze me! I can tell there will be a lot of those explored in this book.

Writing level: How proficient are you with your language and grammar?

Is the writing level making me cringe? No. Could it be better? Yes. While there isn't cringeworthy instances, we definitely have room for improvement. Grammar and sentence structure is good, with minor errors here and there. I would suggest for the author to do quick editing before posting and it would lead to great success!

Indian Culture: Whether it is old-school, contemporary or 500 years in future, how well does your story spread the theme: Being Indian.

Indian wedding, aunties ready to marry their sons and nephews, friends having hidden agenda to set up the single female lead, mysteries of past, mistakes and missions...what else does one need to keep this culture going? I for one, am definitely hooked!

Chapters 2/3/4

As I continued reading, it was quite helpful to have the flashback chapter instead of a quick narration of their first meet. Writer does a good job of moving forward with the plot and am quite eager to see how it unfolds.

Plot Delivery: How well do you balance the genre and element you are trying to address?

This is one of the most beautifully written books, with an engaging plot and captivating chapters transitioning from then and now. That is what makes the book worth reading. The writer does not simply summarize their past into the present in the form of memories. It's written down as if the character is going back and reliving the moments, hence giving the same opportunity to the reader.

Element: How well does your story reflect the element of your choosing, no matter the overall genre?

Desi Diaries element is there in the form of main character having to travel due to work. And, even before that we read about the times female lead had to relocate in the past. I am eagerly looking forward to see how each move has added another story into her life.

Chapters 5/6

We finally get to see few moments from male leads perspective, his feelings on how the two characters become friends and meet again. I must say, it was the perfect time to give these dose to the readers. Whether the novel makes it to Top 2 or not, it has definitely captured my attention. I wish the writer all the best and keep working on the plot as I will be back to read it!

Over all, Until We Meet Again has me glued to the edge of my seat. Ignoring all the cliches, I cannot stop smiling even when the main characters make me want to smack their head. The writer paints an extraordinary world that seems so serene and easy moving around the chaos of wedding preparations. I rarely found any errors in writing which only adds to the reading experience! Wishing the author all the best with the rest of the novel.