Transformation by @jamie_swift
Book: Transformation by jamie_swift
Judge: Laxmi
For: Mystic Awards 2018
The cover, title and summary everything fits well in it's place. The pace of the plot is really good, fantabulous, actually. Transitions could be worked on . Grammar needs assistance. The writing style is really worth reading. A bit Cliche but still needed for this plot, setting is really good, the historical events are used wisely. I liked the characters , somewhat relatable to me ... And the side characters are really awesome specially her pals.
I really loved this book , the characters are really well groomed. It's really relatable. And this is the best book I've read so far. Really appreciate if you could rectify your grammar mistakes and the transitions between scenes. Keep up the good work.
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