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The War Of Atlantis by @SahikaD

Book: The War Of Atlantis by 

Judge: Laxmi

For: Mystic Awards 2018

Cover could be designed well , the title is really good and the summary is apt. Not good but not bad also. There is style in writing. Editing could be done in a much more plausible way. Pacing is also good. Grammar needs to be improved. Good transition effects. Delivery of lines is really amazing. Really creative. I really liked it and wanted to read more. From the first chapter itself. Setting up of Greek gods and goddesses is also appreciated. I really loved the characters especially the twins and their names - Creta and Kalinique.

It's a really great book and I loved reading it. Apart from some grammatical mistakes and editing effects everything is good. Just a suggestion , please change the cover as it's such a pain in the eyes to look at. Keep it up. It's a really good plot with well suited characters. 

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