Book: The Rules of Inheritance by demidork25

Judge: Dralaq

For: Mystic Awards 2018

The title is really interesting, though the previous cover did not exactly match well with the story but I see that you have taken my advice and changed it, this one suits the story a little better but not completely, if you get what I mean.Moving on to the story, you did mention it to be mature, but there is a thin line of difference between a mature book and an erotica and what you have written in the first few chapters was a straight right eroticaIts better to know more about the main characters before jumping into it.As for the plot, it was a little fast paced and a few reasons were not detailed enough also, please specify in detail why her company is taken away from her.Grammar can be improved, at some places in the book, the gender has been mistaken.Your taken on the paparazzi is a bit too unrealistic.What I like about your book is that the girl for once is not a submissive and has an attitude (a lot sometimes, please avoid that).Make the people like the main lead and not make her seem as a brat seeing as you haven't specified yet who the other main lead is.Tip- Reply to as many comments as you can, it helps in building reader.