Book: The Great Game by sammurphy3

Judge: Alex

For: Mystic Awards 2018

Title is already taken by a few other books. Cover is good. Summary is good. A bit slow. Didn't interest me. Bad timing on delivery. They randomly get chosen and thrown into a war in the first chapter. I only noticed a few minor grammar errors. A unique book. Doesn't seem to be accurate as they don't have much training. Characters are too 2-D for me.

Overall, an okay book that needs some work. The title has been taken by some other books. It starts out with way too many descriptions. The start of the action was a bit questionable as to whether it is accurate or not and was placed oddly. I would suggest starting out with more chapters to really set-up the action instead of throwing your characters into it. However, this is definitely a great concept and something I would like to read once improvements are made.