Book: The Fourth Of July by corey_2018

Judge: Laxmi

For: Mystic Awards 2018

Title is good but the cover is too normal... The essence is really great, mystery works really well with this style. Good pace of the story and the plot is also a bit refreshing. Transitions are actually not seen except in the first chapter since the following chapters are actually based on one character's thought process. The Grammar could be improved as well as the writing style.

Creative enough for this category and not too cliche... As well as the date and the setting as well as the start of the book is really good. Characters are really shaped well, the side characters need attention , the plot really suits well with the characters involved. And some characters need a bit of polishing.

It's a really good book to read since I'm a fan of thriller and fantasy, this book really suits my reading style. The grammar could be improved as well as the writing style. The transitions could be worked upon. Keep up the good work. Some editing and your book will be a big hit, for sure.