Book: Mist of Doom by TheBiologist13

Judge: Nams

For: Mystic Awards 2018

The Author has great imaginative skills! The story is so unique, so creative. I was in awe with the story setting! How did the Author manage to think of it? Put it in words and build a story out of it? It's really appreciative. The story has a good space, neat delivery and well maintained narrative. It makes an easy read with no much of complications. The only part I felt a little hindered is in grasping various things that's going on like the mist, the Central Billion, understanding the Seed's etc. But as the story progresses, you get a grip I guess. My suggestion would be to work on those lines and it a little simpler for the simple minded audience! The cover is good, but can improved. Synopsis can be made a lil more interesting.. 

I like the pace the story takes, it's just as needed! Even though the very first few paragraphs may not be able to grab the attention of the reader, it gets interesting later on. Author has a really great imaginative skills! The story is too good, too creative. The only part I felt it needs improvisation is explaining certain terms of the story setting. At some parts, I found myself confused.

Author has good command over language. It's simple, neat and has minor mistakes which can be easily fixed. The story narrative and delivery is really good. Even though it's general narrative, author manages to switch between the pov seamlessly! The story transitions are all well paced.

Too creative! Entire setting, the background is really good. As far as I am concerned, the story is unique. I have never read anything like this. I like the way author incorporates various things from zombie, ghost, alien, the good, the bad and all of that!

All characters are neatly created. Each character get good space and narrative in the story. Even the side characters are well showcased. There is a well made charatcer development, but maybe it could be worked on a little bit. 

I wish all the very best for the Author! Loved reading this!