Lead Me Astray by @lesserknown1
Book: Lead Me Astray by lesserknown1
Judge: Laxmi
For: Mystic Awards 2018
I really liked the title and the cover. Summary can be a bit up to the point. The pace is really good. Editing could be done ... Small minor mistakes that's all. Grammar is OK. Just a bit off the point at times of excitement I guess. But I really liked the writing style. A bit Cliche but it's OK for this plot. And yes it's really a unique plot and setting up of characters. Your characters are the main highlight and you've really pulled it off well. It's a really good book. I really loved the characters. Rectify your minor mistakes. That's it. It's a good book to go. One of the best books I've read so far. Keep up the good work.
Bạn đang đọc truyện trên: Truyen247.Pro