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Inhuman by @IamFourth

Book: Inhuman by IamFourth

Judge: Laxmi

For: Mystic Awards 2018

Title , cover and summary is really good. But summary needs a bit of touch up. Essence is really good. Good plot. Unique idea.  You really need to check on your grammatical errors. As well as transition scenes. Creativity is good. Not at all cliche. Setting up of the plot is also OK.  Characters are really good. Needs a bit improvisation.  Keep an eye on your grammatical errors. Apart from that it's a really great book with an equally good and creative idea.

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