Book: Imprinted by SanskrutiD

Judge: Nams

For: Mystic Awards 2018

The cover is nice. But could be better. Title is good and synopsis needs improvement. The pace of the story is moderate, there is nothing major to be hooked to the story. It goes with a flow. It has creativity, it has plot but nothing too enticing for readers. Could be improved on that part. Grammar is simple, easy to follow and there are some minor errors that needs fix. The delivery needs improvement, it lacks the strong narrative skills.

The creativity is a plus point, however it's based on Twilight and I can see a lot of references. Quite a cliche I guess. As in, too many stories of similar kind minus the twilight setting that gives the author a chance to make it different. I am not very convinced on author's creativity here. Could have been way better. The character development is the highlight. I love how the author carries the Twilight characters forward with her own imagination and few references from the movie. Author gives good space for the characters to build, bond and develop. Few places seems rushed though, that needs to be looked on.

The story is good and the plot delivery is simple. I loved the bond between Renesmee and Jacob. It's beautiful! Author's attempt at creating something out of what's left from Twilight is much appreciated. It was a well made attempt. My suggestions would be to improve on the narrative and introduce some enticing elements to keep the readers hooked. The story pacing is moderate, could be better. I also liked how the Author developed Renesmee's character! I felt as if I am continuing from where the movie left off. All in all, a very good attempt! Kudos and all the best.