Book: He Tripped Me by CXTEXRX

Judge: Nams

For: Mystic Awards 2018

Based on Harry Potters series. Author uses Malfoy x Reader for the plot of the story! It's quite imaginative and unique. All Character references are neatly written and developed. The story has a decent pace but somewhere it lacks to grab the readers attention. The chapter seems plain and empty. Narrative can be improved a lot. However, I like how the story is created, the setting and the progress. It's simple and easy to follow. My suggestion to author is to use the name for the Lead female character. Using "Y/L. Y/N" can be a big put off while a reader is immersed into the chapter. Also, please fix the minor grammar errors. I loved the book cover and the title! It's beautiful! Good luck!