Haikus by @Kerrigankenna
Book: Haikus by Kerrigankenna
Judge: Nams
For: Inked 2018
I love the way the author plays with the syllables. The poems are short, neat and speaks about love, sadness, pain and loss. It's beautiful! Kudos for bringing up familiar feelings and showcasing it with so much of creativity. My only suggestion is to name the book with a better title. Even though the title is to the point and tells us what kind of a poetry form it is, I would still advice on coming up with another name. Author is proficient in English and has good command over the language. Even the syllables are all nicely placed. All in all, Author has a great potential! I loved reading these Haikus!
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