Book: Erudites: The Necromancer by PurpleReborn

Judge: Megan

For: Mystic Awards 2018

The cover: I like the cover, though saying that - the red text doesn't suit the picture, maybe a different font could be used too.The title is unique and inviting.The synopsis is long but gives a nice idea of what the book is about/what will happen.

The first chapter is really inviting.The only problem I really had with it is the long length as many Wattpad reader don't like it as much (maybe down to reading on phones, etc.) and as this is the first chapter it may through some readers off.The long chapter ruins the pace slightly for furthermore chapters as they are slightly shorter.Editing is really good, not many problems spotted.

Some descriptions are heavy, though descriptions are of course a great thing to include, sometimes they can be a bit much.The transition are easily smooth and are delivered fairly well. I've never read a book about theiving so to me this book is definitely creative and there is a clear sense of research .I didn't find it cliched either.The setting is good also.

There's plenty of dynamic aspect to the relationships though in the first chapter you don't see much personality to Elliot which might through some readers off reading.

This is definitely a great writer's work! There was really little to say that was bad, though I thought the first chapter was a bit much - lengthwise.Also I'm I think you could improve your book over with what I said above. (Colour/font)