Book: Cupid Rhymes With Stupid by Quiet_Pen

Judge: Alex

For: Mystic Awards 2018

I looked at the cover wanted to read it. You have very good cover art. However, from the summary I couldn't really tell much about the book. It simply talked about the characters. The title "Cupid Rhymes With Stupid" is good, however, the extras in the title were a bit annoying. Then, I had to look through a few pages to get to the actual story. I noticed you listed the characters and their personalities at the start. Your audience should be able to know what the characters are like from the story. I think there were a few too many. The pace was a bit slow and the hook was almost nonexistent. From five chapters, I could not really tell what was happening, at least a part of the plot should have been explored to keep the reader's attention. However, I related to this and enjoyed the characters, even if there were too many. Spelling and grammar is also on point. From the descriptions of the characters, I think you entered in the wrong category. Nevertheless, I think you could benefit from getting rid of additional characters, providing in-book descriptions of the characters, and getting rid of the extra chapters at the start.