And It Happened by @Maliciuex_Gal
Book: And It Happened by Maliciuex_Gal
Judge: Alex
For: Mystic Awards 2018
I'm getting a little too hung up on the title. There are FOUR books beside this one with the same title as this exact title could be used for any book. Cover is okay, summary needs improvement. It goes at a good pace. Even from the first chapter, I wanted to read more. Editing could definitely be better. Grammar is quite bad. There is writing style in this and delivery of lines is pretty good. I noticed there are pictures at the top and in the story, which is not really my style, but definitely unique. I don't think it's cliched. There is many characters and I can relate to some of them. There is an attempt to introduce characters gradually. I like the characters.
This is quite possibly the best book I have read in this category. I'll admit it was a rocky start. The title is used for multiple other books. But as soon as I read this, I was captivated. Pacing is good. The grammar needs to be improved upon. It is a creative story. Characters are good but are explained after every chapter. I would recomend you change the title, fix your grammar issues, and do more show, don't tell. Otherwise this is a well written story.
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