A FIGHT FOR SURVIVAL by @Amaana-Deena
Book: A FIGHT FOR SURVIVAL
Judge: Akshay
For: Mystic Awards 2018
I really like the cover of the book, same can be said for the title, both suit each other in a way. Synopsis is a bit off though, maybe due to the grammar, a bit editing will fix it. The pace I think is acceptable and pretty good, the book needs some editing which is also the reason that it doesn't hook us the readers to an extent. While the writing technique and transitions are good, the grammar is not as good as others, due to this fact it makes the story a bit less appealing, though with some editing it will turn great. The setting Is great and unique, although there's some cliche element to it, the setting does the work. The characters personality and development though nice seems a bit rushed, a bit of working and it will turn out great.
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