Book: 28 days in Christmas Town by jasminestars

Judge: Dralaq

For: Mystic Awards 2018

The title is different from all other books I have read, the synopsis has this different feel to it, which makes you want to read more, the story has a live feel to it, and you can feel the spirit of Christmas, the joy and happiness in the air while you read the book. The description provides the ideal setting, I can literally picturise it in my head. The problem is, there is too much of description and less of a story. Grammar is poor in the first few chapters but improves later, unfortunately the first few chapters are the ones that are being judged. This story is perfect for a hallmark movie. Its interesting to know what happens next between Abbie and Ayo. You have beautifully portrayed her feeling when she gets neglected by her mother. Your character of Sarayah seems to be exaggerated, reduce that. This book is a perfect fairytale romance, keep it up.

Tip- Tone down on the description and add more story.