As promised to u guys I have completed my sketch which I posted today morning, so as usual first sketch is original one.,

but I apologize u guys already because I messed up with Ash because I  was focusing mainly on Serena, so enough of explaining, my present u with my version,

In this I tried to keep all the suggestion given by u guys especially Scarlett-Red.

Do check her drawing book she is way more better than me..,

Thanks you guys....

PEACE OUT.....