Author: @NovaEraKitty 

Although I've come seen many books about dragons on Wattpad, I've not read more than one or two max. I think you're is the second. The reason is that I don't really like reading about well dragons. Unless they're just a part of a plot and not the main characters. However, I really enjoyed reading your book!

Cover, Title and Blurb:

The blurb is really good. It's very interesting and immediately shows the amazing uniqueness of the plot. The title and the blurb are mostly why I agreed to do this review. I found the whole idea of Pocket Dragons to be super intriguing. So great job in writing an excellent blurb and the perfect, brief, eye-catching title. One of my favourite parts of the title is the fact that it basically sums up what's different about this book as compared to all the other books, about dragons, out there.

As for the cover, it's not very eye-catching. If I was looking at a bookshelf in a book store or even scrolling through the thousands of books here on Wattpad, I would probably not even give it a second glance. The only thing that might catch my attention would be the title and after that the blurb. A story as cool as yours deserves to be read and it's a real shame if the cover fails to be engaging. There is nothing much wrong with the image itself, it's just not a picture that stands out. Maybe you could use some vibrant colours or a different picture of a dragon. Although, the title and blurb are enough to entice a reader, the cover unfortunately tends to be what the readers base almost their entire first impression on.

Grammar:

There wasn't much wrong in this section. The really small errors that are present, have already been pointed out by readers in the comments. Since your book is complete, you don't have to worry about updating. So why don't you use that time to read the comments and edit out the mistakes. There are hardly any as it is. All in all you don't really have any issues in this section. 

Flow: 

The lack of many grammar issues, really made this an easy read. It's very well written as well, and the pace of the story flows smoothly. I really dont have much to say here as you've done a great job with the way you have written this book!👍❤

Characters:

I honestly loved each and every one of your unique characters. Everything about them is refreshingly different, from their personalities to their names. My favourites are Azara, Will and Frida. I really can't choose! I love Frida's shy bravery, Azara's entire personality and Will... I think he's adorable! I also really like that although he's a little childish and gullible, theres still a hint of maturity in him.

Clara is just insane really! I really enjoyed all her scenes especially.

Isis's s letting Azara and Angus escape rather than escaping herself was really touching. Her staying to help the rest of the dragons really made me respect her character. I think I'd say she is definitely one of the best characters.

The different povs of each character were also a great way of portraying their characters without making it seem as though you're just dumping information on the readers.

Overall, you've done an amazing job with your characters and character development!👏

Other Thoughts:

Your descriptions are really good. Half the time, I felt as though I was living through the scenes myself. Especially the action scenes. Also, the drawings of each dragon at the beginning of the chapters are really good. They especially help in letting the reader visualize the characters even better.

The endings of the chapters were really good as well and left enough mystery for the reader to want to continue reading.

Very nice plot twists! Everytime I expected something to happen it wouldn't and that a great way to avoid becominf a sort of cliche book. I loved how you introduced the powers of Angus, Azara and Frida. I never saw them coming! Also, the suprise as to who Frida really is! That was just great!👏❤❤

I also really liked how you kept shifting between the scene at the lab and what Angus and Azara were doing.It really helped in providing a break from each scene, while also keeping the reader interested in what would happen next. It kept the plot feeling fresh and new.👍(I'm not sure if you get what I mean but I really hope you do!)

The epilogue, though good, did not really make me want to anxiously continue reading which, if you want people to read the sequel, is not the best thing. You need to leave it on a bigger cliffhanger. Maybe a chapter from Will's point of view, how he's been kidnapped.

One of my most favourite parts about this book was how you amazingly managed to weave humor into your incredible action scenes. I haven't really seem a lot of that in most of similar books I've read. You had me at the egde of my seat tense yet laughing hyterically at the Clara and the suited men chasing Will, Angus and Azara!😂👍❤

Advice:

You really don't need any, you've done an amazing job! The fact that people want to write fanfics and headcannons about this book just goes to show how good it is. Congrats on that by the way! (yep I read the comments as well)

I will say that, as many people said in the comments, do level your book as complete. You can always still add to it or remove the label but I think till then, you should definitely let first time readers know that it's complete.

Don't forget to edit out the small mistakes as mentioned earlier. Re-reading and editing your book are the best things to do once you've completed it.

Overall, I really do recommend this book to everyone. It's an amazing read that you're missing out on. 

Thanks for sharing your book with me!

Goodluck with the sequel and all your future endeavours! -Rose❤