Author: @DragonGirl_97

To start of with I'd like to say that I read your book without putting it down! Your review wasn't due yet but I decided to just give it a read. Maybe like just the first two to three chapters. But the book was just so good that I could not stop reading! Thank you sooo much for requesting this review because I probably wouldn't have ever found this book otherwise.❤

Cover, Title and Blurb:

Amazing, amazing and then again amazing!!! I absolutely adore the cover and title! The cover is unique and instantly eye-catching. It also kind of let's the reader know what to expect from the book. The title too is amazing. Short, to the point and... (here I go again).... amazing! The blurb is great too, giving enough information to get the reader's attention and arouse their curiosity. You are perfect in this section!👍

Grammar:

No problems here either and trust me, I looked for errors! You're really not leaving me with anything to say to you that could be considered as construtive critisizm! So you should probably expect this review to be full of praises! The book truly feels like it's a proper published book in a bookstore. A book that I would 100% pick up to read!❤

Flow:

The story is flowing smoothly, not at all rushed. I hate it when authors rush their stories as that always causes them to become confusing. So far you're doing just fine in this regard. The story is just beautifully written and I cannot praise you enough for it!

Characters:

I love how well you've developed your characters!

I already adore Kerensa! I kind of like both Felix and King Cenred! I totally despise King Baeldon!

Don't tell me Felix is dead! It wasn't quite clear in the book. I quite liked him.

I also really like the unique and interesting names of the characters, especially Kerensa and Cenred! They really add to the charm of the book.

All in all, the characters are wonderfully fleshed out. I already feel a strong emotional attachment to Kerensa, which is rare for me so early on in a book. So fantastic job with you characters!❤👍

Other Thoughts: 

Your plot unbelievably good! And your descriptions.... don't get me started! I think one of the biggest charms of your story is your descriptions. Personally I feel I'm horrible at descriptions and so your descriptions just blew my mind. I don't even like reading overly descriptive books as they tend to be boring. However, your's are neither tedious nor boring! I'm fact they are great at immersing the reader further into your story!💜

Another great part about your story is that it's so action packed. Not too much, as that gets irritating, but enough that there isn't a single boring moment in the whole book! There wasn't one part where I was like "ok whatever..." or "can you just get on with it".

And as heart wrenching as it is, I'm glad Kerensa's family didn't survive. No, I'm not heartless (that chapter really broke my heart😢). However, it made it realistic. I mean how cliche would it be if some miracle saved them? What you did was totally unexpected, on my part at least. To be honest, I thought you would go with the cliche and save them. I'm kind of glad you didn't. (I'm also not😟😉)

Your descriptions of Kerensa's feelings are something else I really liked. They really help the reader in being more emotionally invested in the story. I mean, I could practically feel her pain and sadness. That really increased my overall experience of the story. Great job!👍

Advice:

You don't need any advice from me! You are doing a superb job! 👏

I do recommmed joining a bookclub if you havent already. One that im a member of is "CARTA" by ccreationz and i really hope you give it a try. In the same club ccreationz also critiques and reviews your stories and you don't have to be a member to apply.

I cannot recommend this book enough! I also cannot wait for your next update! Fingers crossed it'll be sooner rather than later!

I wish all the best and I'm pretty sure I'll be seeing this book published one day! You really are "The Next Big Thing"❤. -Rose