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N-acha ......vaise kitna wierd h na.... Matlab log sabse pehle milte h toh...... Naam puchte h......pr mujhe toh tumhra naam hi nhi pata....

Ne-mumma..... Ne bhi kha tha ki sabse pehle name puchna chaiye......... Or apko pata h..... Apka or mera naam bahut same h.....

N-acha..... Kya name h apka..?!

Ne- neav....

N-neav....?!

Ne-ku acha nhi h....(he asked but neil was in hisown world )

Flashback

Avni,neil,ali and riya ....all 4 of theme were sitting on the bed talking about random things....

R-avni...... Sun.... Dekh tu toh mosi or chachi ban gi...... Ab mujhe kab bna rhi h.....

N-bahut jald... (listening this avni's cheeks turned deep red )

A-neilll..... (to avoid any further teasing she said).... Vaise riya tune kuch naam soche......

R-haan.... Mein or ali ne toh bahut pehle se decide kiya hua h...... Ki agar ladki hogi tohein naam rkhugi..... Or ladka to ali.....

N-vaise kya naam soche....

Ali-ishaan....

R-aliya...

A-awww....kinne cute name h... ❤❤❤

N-sach mein..... Pata h meine bhi soche h.....

A-huh?!... Kya?!...

N-humre bacho ke naam.....

Ali-areee.... Wahhh.. Bhai tu toh bahut fast nikala.....

N-vo.... Toh mein hu..... Pr mere se fast tu h....

A-tum dono apne bakwaas band kro.....

R-exactly...... Vaise neil kya naam soche h tumne....

N-ladke hoge to navika...... And gor boy its..... Neav...

R-ohhh... God... Neil naam toh ache h ....but it seems ur so self obsessed.....

A-riya.... It doesn't seems..... He is self obsessed...... Naam toh ase rkhe h.....jaise iske akale ke bache ho.....

Neil laughed looking at avni's angry face....

Flashback ends...

Ne-buddyyyyy.....

N-haannnnn... Kya h?!..

Ne-ap ko kya hua..... Kinne der se bula rha hu.....

N-sorry... Bacha....

Ne-kya hua apko mera naam acha nhi laga......

N-nhi... Baby apka name bahut acha h..... Chalo kehlte h....

Ne-haan... Chalo....

They played for sometime...... After getting tired both sat on a bench....
Ne-buddy i'm feeling hungly...

N-pr... Baby yaha kya kaoge ap..

Ne-look.... Buddy bhelpuri...

N-noo... Its so unhygienic.... I can't let u eat such a stuff.... Noo...

Ne-buddy...... Don't behave like mumma..... Sach mein bahut bhook lagi h.... Plzzz(showing a puppy face)

N-ummm..... Fine chalo.... Pr thoda sa....

They went to bhelpuri stall....

N-bhaiya ek plate dena.....

Ji sahab....he replied...

N-ek second apke pass dusre gloves h....

Haan....

N-so... Vo use kijye....and......Use paper plates.....

Ji..

N-and ya....don't make it too spicy....... He won't be able to eat it....

Seeing neil and his talks one of the lafy who was standing there said......... Such a caring father...... Varna aaj kal ke parents ko toh apne bacho ko kayal hi nhi h.....

Neil's pov....

Ssly......am i behaving like his father......... No... Vo ase he keh rhi honge..... Ya sach tha..... Ohh.... God.... Somebody tell me.....

Pov end...

Yeh lijye sahab......

N-haan.... Kitna hua ...

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N-yeh lijye..... Chalo neav.... Vaha beth ke kha lena....

They both sat on the bench...
Neav was about to taje the first bite but first he offered neil.... Intially neil denied..... But bcz neav was requesting so he agreed.......

After having the first bite neil felt wierd..... Then neav started to eat..

But suddenly that plate fell from neav's hand and they both........

End...

Suspence.. 😁😁😁😁...

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