Warning: I'm very emotional right now.

Guys, I'm going nowhere with this story.

Marley left a few months ago (you'll know where to if I ever reach the end of this story) and since then, I've been writing alone.

I'm not awesome at writing, considering this is my first Wattpad book, but I'd hate for it to be taken down or left incomplete.

I need your help.

Everyone who is reading this - whether you have read the story from the start, or not - please do me a favour.

You need to go back to the very first chapter and re-read everything (all the chapters). Tell me at which point you feel like giving up on the story and why. Point out the loopholes, the places where the story is too slow, where it's too fast, any characters that you can't understand, language errors, layering of the characters, sequence of events - everything.

I request you to give a detailed critique of this work. You can post it as a comment on the story (even inline comments are nice), or send me a PM.

You know why I'm asking this?

Because this is not just a work of fiction. It's based on a true story and all these events actually happened in the real world.

I don't want to give up on this story. Not this one. I have put up so many stories on Wattpad, only to take them down later but I really want to see the COMPLETED tag on this one.

There's something about My Journals, My Confessions that keeps calling me back to it. And I want the same to happen to you.

I want to develop my writing skills so much that even you feel like coming back to the story, even you feel like the story is calling out for you to come back to it.

I want your feedback. Together, I know we can do this.

I know there's nothing in it for you right now but once the story gets completed - all of you who'll help me now will get chapter dedications, or something even better if I can come up with it.

Please?